Wallflower

My second read from this author but this one was a full book to read and as much as I loved the story I think it was too long with too many repetitive words and phrases.

Tessa seems a bit naive at the beginning and nothing like the woman she becomes at the end. I enjoyed how the story went but I also had hopes for a different ending. I feel like some of her story was a bit repetitive and could’ve been great even with it shortened a little. Tessa sounds like this woman who has been in the world but honestly trusted too easily. My stomach is wrecked from the nausea I had throughout this book with worry. I had horrible horrible thoughts of how this could go and I never saw this ending happening.

James seemed like my pick for Tessa but I could also see the appeal of Emilio and his sexiness. It seemed like something was gonna happen from beginning and again, I was on edge most of this book!! Emilio was too good to be true and James seemed too eager to discount him. I think I sat rocking myself for comfort throughout the second half of this book! It was so hot and incredible arousing but also scared me something very bad was coming.

I really enjoyed a lot of this book, most of this book actually. My only thing is that is you were to re-edit this book to really go back over words you repeated, they aren’t needed, and other words can be use to express what you want. I understand how you wanted us to feel her orgasm hitting her hard but using the same word over and over is something you should stay away from and try using more descriptive words. At times you did that but then would go back to the repetitive and that just doesn’t make me want to read it or helps me feel the reaction you want. Awesome job though and I wish you best of luck in the future.

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